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What do you think of my "Enter The Winter" story so far...BTW My English can be quite bad? It's great, can't wait to read the rest... It's pretty legit! It's cool It's okay It's quite bad I've read better... It's bad!

Locations

 * Crofton School
 * Antarctica
 * Australia
 * Wisbech

Sam's Story Kill List

 * Abu Bakr
 * Donald Trump
 * Rhianna Baker
 * Ian Brady
 * Owen Papworth
 * Kacpar Kozdrój
 * Philip Garrido
 * Lewis Percy
 * Tom Reed
 * Nico
 * Marc Bache
 * Josh Austins
 * Ryan Smith
 * Finley Buckland

Episode 1 - Enter The Winter
Chapters = Deaths =
 * Introduction
 * Crofton School
 * Antarctica
 * Crofton School
 * Nick (His Friend)
 * Mr Odowda

Episode 2 - Blood Among Us
Chapters = Deaths = William
 * Australia
 * Antarctica
 * Wisbech

Episode 3 - Ignore All Fate
Chapters = (TBA) Deaths = (TBA)

Episode 4 - All Alone Now
Chapters = (TBA) Deaths = (TBA)

Episode 5 - Days To Remember
Chapters = (TBA) Deaths = (TBA)

Episode 6 - East To West
Chapters = (TBA) Deaths = (TBA)

Episode 7 - Battle To Wars
Chapters = (TBA) Deaths = (TBA)

Episode 8 - Where Art Thou
Chapters = (TBA) Deaths = (TBA)

Episode 9 - Judge, Jury, Executioner
Chapters = (TBA) Deaths = (TBA)

Episode 10 - The Final Sacrifice
Chapters = (TBA) Deaths = (TBA)

Episodes Book 2 (The Western Sun)

 * Key

The Story (Introduction

 * The rough life of a survivor in Antarctica is going the complete opposite way as his friend enters his life. His friend claims that the survivor is heir to an incredible fortune, all equipment has been taken care of already, all there's left to do is collect them. Unsure what to think of all this and of his friend. The survivor somewhat sits still in his tent keenly agrees to the proposal, no matter what, something has to be done in this situation, hopefully this was the right choice. But what if his friend speaks only lies, "Are you coming?," Said his friend. The survivor sat there trying not to feel cold. Or what if this is all far bigger than what has been cold. How could an ordinary survivor be needed for a situation like this. On top of a ball of snow was a man made of ice. His cloak was brown with grey feathers surrounding his neck. His blue eyes glare at the survivors, and they stare back at him. He moves his first foot and the survivors pull out their stick like spears. "What the heck is that?" said the survivor. they both looked at the ice like man for minutes. "Maybe it's a long loss survivor who went missing awhile back?" both men looked at eachother and thought to themselves that they were gonna die. His friend stepped forward and suddenly stopped as he could hear the cracking of thin-ice between his feet.

Crofton School
I sat on my table surrounded by my friends, Niamh, Tessa, Hannah, Katie and the one I hate so much, Rhianna. I looked sternly at my reading book, Horrible Science. My eyes sweeped around staring at everyone. Suddenly I looked out of the window and thought that my town was quiet. "Hampshire", I said. As I stared at my teacher, Mr Norton. I had a shiver down my back. A cold shiver. A shiver which felt like a massive bucket of ice cubes went down the back off my neck. I hated my uniform, we have to wear a black coloured blazer and a tie. The tie has a colour depending on what house you're in. I'm in house Frankin, which is red, well, everyone in my class is in the same house. But anyone you have Newton, which is green. Einstein, which is blue. And Darwin, which is yellow. They're all based off of scientists. Anyway, Mr Norton always waits for people to be quiet, otherwise he gets mad. But I like him, he can be really funny and trustworthy. "Everyone be quiet!", said James Bird. James is one of those students who tries to be cool infront of everyone, as if he "thinks" he's the leader of our tutor group. I hate him. Well, kind of. The thing is with me, I like to think of myself of having a "Kill List" of people who I think need to die. I AM a kind caring person, very kind, especially to animals. But if someone messes with me, I like to think about getting revenge in a good way. On another table in my class, you have one of my best friends, Taylor Hughes and my other best friend, Gregor Newlands. Sometimes I look at them and think that they fancy eachother. So, I try to leave 'em be. As we all turned our heads, the bell goes. I packed up my things, and headed towards the door. As soon as I walked through the door, I saw Lewis Percy, Tom Reed and Nico...er! what's his name?! Nico...um, I don't know? I tried to sneak past them without them seeing me, but, they saw me. "Hey, it's Sam!" All three of them looked at me. I glared at them. I remembered...they're all on my "Kill List" "So, Sam, remember your bike accident?!", said Lewis. I knew they were doing it for coolness and support but I really just wanted to turn round and punch 'em in the face. That's when I heard the sound of the zip on my bag, opening. I turned round, took my bag off, and zipped it back up. I quickly turned round and attempted to punch Tom in the face. BUT! Marc Bache grabbed my hand out of no where and twisted it. "Ah!" I quietly screamed. Then Josh Austins, Finley Buckland and Ryan Smith joined the clash. Marc moved an inch towards my face. "Just. Stop!" He demanded. That's when I realised that all seven of these guys were on my "List". I really glared at all of them. "Oooh, he's being a smug", Ryan slyly implied. Suddenly, Mrs Badesha came round the corner. "You lot, get to class!", she shouted. "This isn't over, Sam." Marc let go of my fist with a push. "It sure ain't", I replied.

Antarctica
The "ice man" stood on top of the ice mountain. The thin-ice was breaking between his friend's feet. All of a sudden the Ice Monster stepped forward. It shocked the survivors as they witnessed the ice man stand on a block of snow. His eyes glowed blue through the snow. His mouth was as blue as the ocean. His friend stepped forward...plunging and clutching through the wind and snow. "Get BACK!", the survivor demanded. His friend could not hear the words from the survivor. The wind and snow was too loud for him to hear. The ice MONSTER stepped off the icy cliff and pulled out a ice shard. His friend's eyes opened wider, he became more scared than before. A couple more ice monsters stood behind him, about six. They both froze. The ice beneath their feet broke. The survivor fell in, but his friend did not. The survivor shivered and tried most hard to hard out. He couldn't. His friend didn't even notice, the survivor tried to call his name, but the coldness of the icy water froze his lungs, he could barely scream. The ice monster ran down the hill alone and stopped infront of his friend's face. His friend did not move, as if the ice monster had control of him or something. Suddenly, his friend's eyes went pure white, he huffed. The ice man decapitated his friend and carried his head in the air. The ice man through his friend's head right infront of the survivor and picked up his friend's long-loss body. The body of his friend's head came alive, it turned into one of them. It's jaws snapped each time. The ice man picked up the head and reattached it to his friend's body. The survivor finally climbed out of the pool of ice and layed on the thick chunk of it. The ice monster walked away back up the hill, demanded that the "Iced His Friend" can attack the survivor. The ice monster and his army walked back over the hills where the survivor couldn't see them. His friend came charging at the survivor, but before he could reach him, an arctic wolf came out of nowhere and pounced onto his friend's body. the arctic wolf ripped open his neck and killed it. It's body shattered like it smashed like diamonds, the rest of it got blown away by the wind. That's when the survivor looked round. There was a clocked man standing on a sleigh with about 5 wolves attached to it. Each were a different species. "Come on!, the clocked man shouted. We'll get you to safety." The survivor tried to get up...but later slowly passed out from the cold.

Crofton School
"Abu Bakr, i whispered. Donald Trump, Ian Brady, Lewis Percy, Tom Reed, Nico, Marc Bache, Finley Buckland, Josh Austins, Ryan Smith, Owen Papworth, Kacper Kozdrój, Philip Garrid-" I suddenly stopped. A shadow was over my desk. "Why are you whispering them names?" My face just froze, I turned round slowly...it was Ben Smith, he had overheard me whispering the names of people on my kill list. "I....um, I'm not saying anything, Ben?!" Ben was confused...but he's one of those kids who would make a joke out of anything. Not ones that do for cool...but he just likes to make people laugh. "It's my...Kill List, i replied. It's names of people I want to kill, y'know." Ben had given up and walked away, probably having a face of "You loser" I began to just ignore him. Suddenly, Mr Norton went onto BBC News. There was information about a woman called Queen Martha is now a new world leader. That means that...! She could be evil and cause war and terror against countries. Why haven't they arrested her? Mr Norton turned round terrified. "Sir, Poppy asked. That means a World War 3?!" The class all looked at Mr Norton. He swallowed with terror. His eyes looked as if he was about to cry. "Are we, Sir?" Demanded Lewis and Joe. Mr Norton still did not answer. We all looked back at the screen, it said what new rules of the world will be made. Like: Headteachers must die. No more School. Children under 18 must live and survive on their own. It also explains how about 10 assassin troops have travelled to 30 different countries to execute all Headteachers. Tessa looked at me and mouthed "What do we do?!" I looked back at the board. "Sir, I said. I need to borrow: Tessa, Taylor, Greg, Hannah, Katie and Ciara. "Very well." Replied Mr Norton. "Sam, what are you doing?" said James Clark. We all just walked out, ignoring his question. I followed us towards the Drama Props Cardboard. As we walked past the library, I saw a hooded figure on the rooftop. I walked a bit faster until we got the building. I entered the props cupboard without making a noise. "What are we doing, Sam?" I sneaked through some props to find a actual sword hidden beneath the props. "Why would someone have a actual sword, it's dangerous." Taylor picked up the sword while I looked for more of them. "It's the smallest sword, I've seen," said Taylor. It's actually really small," said Ciara. I found 6 more. I handed one to Tessa and Taylor. "Oh My God," Eagered Hannah. As time went by, we walked back to class with our mini-type swords. "Aahh!" A girls voice screamed through the hallways. We all ran outside and everyone from all classes ran outside. Including my tutor. Everyone ran to the gates of the school. Everyone was in tears and in shock. Our head teacher, Mr Odowda's head was on a spike. The blood dripped down off his head and on to the road. His eyes were white and all dead. His head lay rested.

Australia, Coastline
Across the sea towards the otherside of the world, lives a girl, aged 14 was standing on her balcony. The sea and wind blew across her face and swept through the door. Cars drove by and followed the main road to their unknown journeys. She had white, shaggy hair slightly covers her strong, tense face. Bright magenta eyes, set handsomely within their sockets, herself and her father were the only people in the world to have magenta eyes. She sat and watched affectionately over the residents they've sought solace in for so long. Fair skin seductively compliments her nose and mouth and leaves a gracious memory of her luck in love. This is the face of Ariella Stormworth, a true explorer among sea creatures. She stands alluringly among others, despite her delicate frame. There's something seductive about her, perhaps it's her presence or perhaps it's simply her sense of comradery. But nonetheless, people tend to share local gossip with her, while hoping she will one day be their leader. "Ariella." said the servant. "Your dad has sent me a letter towards you and also a box." Ariella was confused. "A box with what in it?" The servant brought up the box and placed it infront of her. She opened it carefully and griefly saw a small tank with a small crocodile in it. "Crocodiles really look like that!?" She amazingly said. She smiled. Her hand slowly and gently moved into the tank. The crocodile-like fish jumped up and bit Ariella on her left-hand index finger. it bled more than a normal cut. The pain in it felt like a million needles jabbed her in one go. "AAAHHHH!" she shouted. she fainted with dispear. Her eyes lay shut. "My, God!" The servant shockingly said. He picked Ariella up and grabbed a tissue from the nearby table, and wrapped it around her finger. He then grabbed a cup of water and splashed it on to her face. Suddenly she woke up. "Ooh!" She slightly whimpered. "What-?" The servant sat her up and rubbed her on the back." It's okay." He said. Ariella went on the floor and looked at the tank again. She dipped her hand in it once again. "What on earth are you doing, Ariella?" said the servant. She ignored him. One of her eyes shut. Her face turned slightly with fear. The crocodile-like fish did not bite her, but instead licked her on the cut. It did not hurt Ariella at all. The bleeding went away. "What type of crocodile is this?" She said. The letter from her father lay flat on the box. "Dear Ariella, my sweet little angel. I am not able to return back from the missions with my crew. We are trapped near Antarctica and our ship is ice frozen. One of our crew members as fled the ship alive to bring me this letter towards you. In the box, you will find a baby mosasaur, female baby. she is a new born. Her mother's body was frozen and kept beneath the surface in a ice block near Antarctica. Behonest this sounds crucial but mosasur has never been seen towards the human eye, ever. They are pronouced extinct from the triassic era. They look well different from the way we thought they looked. NEVER. EVER. TELL ANYONE WE FOUND THIS DINOSAUR. They will do scientific reasearch and possibly kill these cute little dinosaurs. Love, Dad. "It's a...mosasaur?!" These creatures have never been seen. I saw a giant one in the film Jurassic World. That was a legend." said Ariella. "Um, Servant-" The servant held his hand out. "Please, just Wilkins." he replied. Ariella was confused. "I never knew your name was Wilkins." she said surprisingly. "Anyway...Wilkins. I think we should get my brother, Brendan and head out to rescue my dad. I have a pet mosasaur now, and when he grows, nothing shall stop me from conquering my future quests.

Antarctica
The survivor woke up cold and desperate for food. His eyes were blood shot and full of fear. He rose from the torn apart sofa and pushed himself more towards the fire. The cloaked man appeared from the otherside of the cabin. The cabin layed abandoned and bright in the snowy storm outside. The survivor opened the curtain, but could not see anything through the snow-stormy night. The fire in the fireplace grew like a beacon in a dark forest. The snow made wind noises up against the wooden front door. The cabin a little small, but could still fit about seventy odd people in it. On the other side layed the six wolves sleeping separately near the other fire. "You all warm yet?!" The cloaked man said. The survivor glanced at him and said, "yeah, pretty warm now that the fire is on!" he replied. They both sat down near the fire and warmed their hands. "I'm so sorry about your friend." The cloaked man said. The survivor looked round at him and said, "It's okay, thanks for saving me." The cloaked man nudged his way more towards the fire. "It's alright. But thank my wolves more for it." The survivor slowly looked round at all the wolves sleeping. "Cute, aren't they." Said the survivor. "Yeah, all different species. Arctic, Grey, Tundra, Red, Black and Timber." said the cloaked man. "What are their names?" Asked the survivor. "Oh, yeah. Sorry. The arctic wolf is called Whiteshade. She's the one who saved you. The grey wolf is called Bane for the size he's grown to be, he's become the "alpha" of the pack. The tundra wolf is called Saturn. He can be protective sometimes. But he will always defend his owner. The red wolf is called Nemo for how red he is towards the film Finding Nemo. The black wolf is called Shadow for how dark his fur is. And the Timber wolf is called Sapphire because sometimes his fur will glow bright blue in the winter." The survivor was very interested with all the facts of his wolves. Wolves were possibly the survivor's favourite animal. The survivor turned towards the cloaksman and said, "Speaking of names, mine is Gared. Gared Paine." The cloaked man turned back round at Gared and said, "Are you related to Robert Paine, the famous shipman?" Gared nodded his head. "Yes, he travelled here actually...I've come here to find him...no one was bothered to actually look for him. He's presumed dead. But I wanna see if It's true! I brought my friend along. His name was Nick. He helped me before he...died." The cloaksman saddened up. "I'm so sorry, Gared. Maybe if I got there in time it would have been alot better." Gared turned away. "It's not your fault...what's your name?" The cloakman took off his hood and revealed his face. "My name is Bazza. Bazza The Bladesman." Bazza's face had a massive scar across from his mouth towards his eyes. It was a mark of terror. But the worst thing was: his face was as pale as a ice cube."So, these "Ice Monsters" what are they? they killed my friend, Nick and I need to get revenge on that leader." Bazza once again removed his hood from off his head. "*sigh* A while ago, I had a couple crew members living with me in Antarctica. One day a man called Bob decided to take a stroll through the windy-snow storm outside. And he never came back. The others went to look for him...but they never returned. That's when my wolves started to get worried. They would bark at the door for nothing. Shadows would appear from window to window. I turned off all the lights in the cabin, until the only light you could see was the glowing snow outside the windows. After all that, a man appeared through my door while I hid in the dark corner over here. My wolves were lying next to me covering my visibility towards this man. Big bright eyes stared through the dark. And they damn well stared at me. I pissed my pants so much until the ice-like man walked back out the door. The next day after the storm. I went to check the icy sea just a few feet from the cabin. Some of the sea surface was frozen, but it wasn't the storm that did it. It was that ice-like man who did this. He stepped onto the water and froze tiny chunks of it. That's what worried me though. If that ice-like man steps foot across the ocean with his small army. He'll make a ice-like trail across towards the real ocean and set foot onto real land. He'll start to murder civilians and turn them into ice monsters. I could not let that happen...so I voweled that I would protect the ocean along with my wolves until the day I die." said Bazza. Gared could not state a word. His mouth just dropped. "People worry about Global Warming. I worry about Global Freezing." said Bazza. "Global Freezing?!" replied Gared. "Yes, Global Freezing. It's what will happen if the "Ice Monster and his army steps foot onto land. Everything he touches or steps on will freeze faster than water flowing through a pipe. Gared and Bazza sat fiercely facing the fire. They stayed calm till dawn woke up.

Wisbech
Samanta sat quietly at her table, she could not bare Sebastian staring at her all the time. Her teacher, Mrs Carter, sat by her desk and waited until break time. "Okay, kids." Mrs Carter said. "You may pack away and head out to break." Samanta walked out of class and saw Rhianne and Kellice heading out of the doors. Samanta wore a white blouse and a blue cardigan. Rhianne and the other students wore the same. "Rhianne!" Samanta shouted. "Do you want to play today?" Rhianne looked softly down at Samanta and back at Kellice. She did not know who to pick. "Kellice, I play with you at lunch, I have to show Samanta something. Rhianne stated. Samanta and Rhianne walked towards a hidden stairway within their school. It lead up to the roof. "We can't go up their, Rhianne! A teacher will find us." Samanta said. Rhianne ignored Samanta as she moved the door open. The faded light could be seen throughout the tunnel depths. They stepped through onto the rooftop to just see a clear view of the school, kids playing and teachers talking. Samanta and Rhianne must stay down, otherwise they'll be seen. Suddenly, Sebastian found them on the rooftop and moved close towards Samanta. "Your dog, Chico, will be mine one day!" Sebastian slyly implied. Samanta slapped him round the face leaving a red mark on his cheek. Kristian also made it to the roof, finding Sebastian holding his face. Kristian charged at Samanta and pinned her down. "What did you do, Samanta!" Kristian said. "He said he would take my dog away and have him as his own!" Samanta replied. Sebastian suddenly took Kristian off of Samanta. He then kneeled down to attempt to give Samanta a kiss. "Get off me, Sebastian!" said Samanta. Then, a year 6 student joined the clash on the roof. Samanta and Rhianne had to deal with Sebastian, Kristian and the Year 6 called William. Kristian backed out of the fight. But he was still on the guys side. Suddenly, Samanta cought a shadow walking behind the building. It was like a ghostly shadow. It freaked her out. William grabbed Rhianne by the throat, choking her. Sebastian tried to throw a punch, but the ghostly figure grabbed him by the wrist and pushed him off the back of the roof. Samanta looked over, his body went down a dustbin. The ghostly figure took William off of Rhianne and slit his throat. His body fell off into the dustbin aswell. Killing them both. Kristian backed out and ran down stairs. But Samanta grabbed him by the neck and said, "You won't speak nothing off this, okay?!" said Samanta. Kristian nodded and ran back down the stairs. Samanta and Rhianne followed him. shutting the door behind them...they got back to class and sat down in their seats. Samanta and Rhianne sat next to eachother. "Okay, I'll call out your names and then please answer them, after a few minutes in finally got to end of the register, "Sebastian Zuk?" Mrs Carter asked. Sebastian was not seen in class, as he was just thrown off the roof by a shadow figure. Samanta thought to herself that they'll find out about the Year 6 student, William, aswell and her and Rhianne will be suspects.